Black Ghost

I honestly gave Eragon a chance, but after the first few pages, I literally fell asleep. The book wasn't really that bad, it was just.....flat. Really boring in my opinion ...

Thanks, It's not supposed to make any sense unless you're Tony.

Wow, I really like this alot. Your descriptions were really vivid and I could really feel the turmoil going on inside Angel. Great Story! And, oh yeah, I also did ...

This was really good, I liked the way you explained how you cannot comment on things you've never seen and instead appreciate what you have. Nice piece!

By the way, I just write these for fun, so don't be alarmed if they make no sense at all.

Oh, I loved this in TSR and I love it here too.

I thought you got the meaning across very well in this poem.

Not much too change in this....well done!

I liked this, except you should take the poll off at the top, it's just silly.

Thanks again everyone who took the time to read this! :D I just wanted to tell you all that I've rewritten this and I think it's a lot better than ...

lol, thanks for that who NONONO! BAD MAGIC! thing. I'll make sure to change that dialouge. *slaps himself for not realizing what he'd done*.

Thanks a lot MetalHead!:D First of all, I know the dialogue is a little off, since I wrote this yesterday and wasn't really focusing on it. This is just a ...

I agree with the others in that you could of made this a little more deeper or more emotional. Although it was well written, I didn't really feel any emotion ...

I don't really see any typos in this and the imagery was really good. Great poem!

I changed the name, what do you think?